Wednesday, August 5, 2020

Wild Lab Writing

Today in writing with my kaiako Mrs Bava, we were writing recounts about our Wild Lab trip or the Awapuni School Fun Run.
I found it easy to write my story because I can remember exactly what had happened on the trip. 
I found it hard to go through my writing and find mistakes because I didn't really have many mistakes but I ended up re-crafting instead. 
Next time I will make sure to find more ways to start my paragraph instead of using the basic words.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 6, 2020 at 9:48 AM

    Kia Ora Kristie-Lee!
    I admire how you use some Te-Reo in this wonderful piece of writing :) It shows that you can talk 2! languages.
    When I read your post it showed me that you are a creative,wonderful writer keep it up Kristie-Lee!
    Maybe next time you could make the background a bit plainer so the reader has more interest in the writing more then the background :)
    Keep up the AWESOME writing!
    From Grace.M

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2020 at 11:18 AM

      Hey Grace! Thanks for the positive comment on my writing I also really enjoyed your writing as well! I hope you have a good day! Your truly Kristie-lee! :)

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