I found it easy to decorate and make my slide look cool.
I found it hard to write my report because it was quite hard.
Next time I will try to make my writing a little more better.
Thursday, June 18, 2020
Matariki Report Writing
Over the past 3 weeks we have been learning about Matariki and report writing.
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Hi Kriste-lee,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have added so much imfomation into your writing its amazing.I like how you have put so much effort into this.Mabey next itme you could add a couple more photos to it.
Thankyou From Summer.
Summer Thank you for the helpful, positive and thoughtful comment.
DeleteKia Ora Kristie,
ReplyDeleteI like how you had lots of information about the Matariki Star cluster!
I liked how you researched and actually thought about what are the Matariki star cluster.
Maybe next time you could add a bigger bibliography because I think you cant get that much information just from 2 sites.
Keep up the AMAZING post!
From Grace.
Kia ora Grace Thank you for the amazing reply and I will continue posting and that's a promise.
DeleteKia Ora Kristie-lee I like how you put all your information on to five slides. rather than putting a paragraph on every slide.Next time you might want to make your words bigger.
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you Rhodes for the very nice comment.
DeleteKia Ora kristie-lee I really enjoyed your woke
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