The Environment Is Our Responsibility

I tenei ra(today) i roto i(in) ruma tahi during tuhi(writing)time with my kaiako Ms Morrowrankin we were learning about persuasive writing because that was our topic for last week and this week. I would say my favourite thing about persuasive writing is that we can try to persuad the readers into beliveing what we say. Not by force but by choice of words. He mea ngawari ki ahau(I found it easy to) do my research because I had really simple points I was going to use as my reasons. I also found it easy to concentrait on my specific wording because I ignored the distractions around me and focused on my mahi. He uaua ki ahau(I found it hard to) translate my research into descriptive and my own words because the research I had read was quite long and confusing but I found it out in the end and my writing turned out pretty good and I am very proud of it. A muri ake nei ka mahi ahau(Next time I will) try and add more descriptive words and publish my work on my blog faster so that I can finish my fast finisher activites. He tino koa ahau(I really enjoyed) doing my persuasive writing and I can't wait to do another piece of persuasive writing again! Ko te tumanako i pai ki a koe aku mahi(I hope you enjoy)! 😄

Persuasive Poster

 Today in ruma rua with my tuhi [writing] Kaiako Mrs Bava we were doing our very own persuasive posters.

I found it easy to create my draft because I had already planned it out even though I made a few mistakes here and there.

I found it hard to try to come up with the setting of where everything should be placed because on google drawings the page is smaller than a real piece of paper but I managed to fit everything in.

Next time I will make sure to go through and fix more mistakes in my draft copy so that next time i publish I don't have so many mistakes and can get my work done while I'm focused.